Azul Crescent's silly scribbles - Impulse Control
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A compilation of the silly and stupid comics that Ive drawn
    • Sundray@lemmy.sdf.orgOPEnglish
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      9 days ago

      That’s weird, I’m able to see it without logging in. I’ll just go ahead and upload it to the post so you should be able to see it on Lemmy.

  • fool@programming.dev
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    9 days ago

    edit: hopefully less mean

    Cute line art but unimaginative storytelling.

    “I procrastinated. I need impulse control” is kind of tell-don’t-show compared to some of this author’s other works, e.g. the “I’m early. I’m basically a trendsetter” comic. Shortform typically has to mix wacky and deep to compel (e.g. Strange Planet defamiliarizes the mundane)

    Maybe a more interesting presentation here could be:

    • 2:40AM Man, I should sleep.
    • 3:25AM Okay, I’ll sleep at 3:30.
    • 3:32AM Nah, I need to sleep at a round-numbered time. Guess I’ll wait til 4.
    • 6:00AM Fuck.

    or something more relatably specific/less straightly told